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Description
perennial pea(vine) or everlasting pea via 35mm film
Image size
1545x1024px 1.03 MB
Make
NORITSU KOKI
Model
QSS-32_33
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Good job on focus, exposure and composition 
I have one thing to criticize...and that is the background...now, I'm not a pro at this either, but it's very hard to find a background from the main subject that is not very/not distracting at all. Here, the other flowers in the background may be distracting to a viewer from the main, in-focused subject. It could be more powerful if you found a background generally mono-colored (like grass or the stems of other plants, same colors of a diferent flower etc), or if you took the photo of another flower that, in different points of views, the background would have something as if an arrangement of flowers that is not distracting.
Otherwise, I really like it. The mood is also nice. Its colors give it an old-fasionedish look.
I have one thing to criticize...and that is the background...now, I'm not a pro at this either, but it's very hard to find a background from the main subject that is not very/not distracting at all. Here, the other flowers in the background may be distracting to a viewer from the main, in-focused subject. It could be more powerful if you found a background generally mono-colored (like grass or the stems of other plants, same colors of a diferent flower etc), or if you took the photo of another flower that, in different points of views, the background would have something as if an arrangement of flowers that is not distracting. Otherwise, I really like it. The mood is also nice. Its colors give it an old-fasionedish look.